I'm a sandcastle
on the beach,
solid and proud.
I'm staring with desire
at the waves.
They're nearly touching me.
If just one could reach me
it would dissolve myself.
It would be the end.
Or a new beginning.
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the_real_linda
- http://the-real-linda.blog.co.uk
- 2007-11-14 @ 14:41:22
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PHOEBE69
- 2007-11-14 @ 17:38:07
Thank you!
But as Sandcastle I'm on a Tropical beach, water is so warm.
If it wasn't I wouldn't stare at waves with desire, maybe I would creep.
Now you wish the water too, don't you?
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the_real_linda
- http://the-real-linda.blog.co.uk
- 2007-11-14 @ 17:49:09
lol thats not fair... no it is... well its freezing here up north, lol... sounds lovely where you are.
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technomist
- 2007-11-18 @ 22:49:58
That's a better sandcastle than I have ever been able to make.
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tobstv
- 2007-11-19 @ 00:32:32
That is a fantastic sandcastle. And a very touching poem.
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thats pretty but makes me feel cold(er) as i think of how cold it must be down the coast at this time of year